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Debangkok Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please edit a part of ending of job letter

Dear All,

Here is my ending part of my cover letter of my job application

Please revise this for erroe.

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More over I have strong interest in marketing field especially CRM and I am currently doing master degree in Business Economics which concentrate on marketing as well as I am expected to finish in next semester and also my research regarding to network - provider. business ,I believe that my experience, analytical skills and understanding of research methodology these qualities would make me a excellent candidate.


My resume is attached. An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company would be most welcome. I appreciate y

Yours faithfully,

dbjj

I appreciate for all comments
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text here. More over I have strong interest in marketing field especially CRM and I am currently doing master degree in Business Economics which concentrate on marketing as well as I am expected to finish in next semester and also my research regarding to network - provider.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please fix them and post your revised text here.
  • More over I have strong interest in marketing field especially CRM and I am currently doing master degree in Business Economics which concentrate on marketing as well as I am expected to finish in next semester and also my research regarding to network - provider.
  • business ,I believe that my experience, analytical skills and understanding of research methodology these qualities would make me a excellent candidate.
  • My resume is attached.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text here.


More over I have strong interest in marketing field especially CRM and I am currently doing master degree in Business Economics which concentrate on marketing as well as I am expected to finish in next semester and
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thank you very much, your comments are very useful to me.
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Dear All,

Here is my revised cover letter, please review and edit for me.

I look forward to hearing you.


As you will see from my resume,I am currently studying a master degree in Business Economics focusing on marketing and will be graduating in March , 2012 and also my research is about consumer analysis and network provider.I believe that my experience, analytical
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I am currently working toward my master's degree in Business Economics, with a concentration on Marketing, and I will graduate in March, 2012. My research is on consumer analysis and network providers.

I believe that my experience, analytical skills, and understanding of research methodology are excellent matches for the q
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thank you so much, this is a vuluable comment.
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