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Mubrik88 Posted 17 years ago
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Could you please correct this reply?
Could you please correct this reply?
I want to learn from my mistakes
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Well, my scariest moment was in the movie " the exorcism of Emily rose" ,When Emily rose was lying on her back in the dark and staring at her boy friend without any movement !!!!!
That was very scary !
I want to learn from my mistakes
==Well, my scariest moment was in the movie " the exorcism of Emily rose" ,When Emily rose was lying on her back in the dark and staring at her boy friend without any movement !!!!!
That was very scary !
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I don't see anything major. "Rose" is Emily's last name, and should always be capitalized. Names of movies and songs usually have every word capitalized, including the articles.
- I don't see anything major.
- "Rose" is Emily's last name, and should always be capitalized.
- Names of movies and songs usually have every word capitalized, including the articles.
- Also, some people prefer to set off these titles with italics, rather than quotes.
- " (1) You can change the capital "W" to a small letter, and make this all one sentence, the last part being a subordinate clause.
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I don't see anything major.
"Rose" is Emily's last name, and should always be capitalized.
Names of movies and songs usually have every word capitalized, including the articles. Also, some people prefer to set off these titles with italics, rather than quotes.
You need to make a decision about the second part of your sentence, beginning with "when."
(1) You
"Rose" is Emily's last name, and should always be capitalized.
Names of movies and songs usually have every word capitalized, including the articles. Also, some people prefer to set off these titles with italics, rather than quotes.
You need to make a decision about the second part of your sentence, beginning with "when."
(1) You
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