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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinions.
I absolutely believe that watching television destroys communication among friends and family. Whatever the television develops, with the view of technology or programs, the negative effect of that increases on human relationships.
The programs of televisions have verity, so it can attract people in any age or style. Men prefer to watch news or sports instead of talking with their wives or playing with their children, so it is obvious that children play alone or if there were another television, they would go to their own programs.
By watching television, the consideration of parents to their children reduces, and television replaces relationship between parents and children.
Television has its own time schedule, so people should obey the television rules, and they cannot plan for their time well. People waste many useful times by watching television.
I studied in a magazine that there was an investigation in a famous university. They choose randomly 30 families and get their televisions for a month. They survey these families behavior among the month. It was wonderful that all of the families confess that their spare times were increased, and the relationship between parents and children became better, and some of these families abandon television forever.
For the same reasons, television has destroyed communication among the friends. People, who are busy to watch television, have no time to spend with their friends.
On the whole, I can say; television has many negative effects, but the worst of them is on the families relationship.