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The investment downturn of top 30 conglomerates will be eased in the second half of this year.
In the economy commitee conviened on July 1, top 30 conglomerates revealed that they are going to invest 7.27 trillion won yearly.
Considering the fact that the investment in the first half of this year was 3.26 trillion won, it is predicted that the second half of this year will be about 4.01 trillion wond.
What's more, the R&D investment will inverse from 5.8% decrease in the first half of year to 9.8% increase in the second half of year.
The job market is also expected to be brisk.
The number of employment has been decreased by 23.6% to 30,508 as compared to the last year but anual plan of employment is predict to decrease by 29.4% to 59,286.
The employment plan of this year was supposed to be 50,127, decreased by 40.3%.
However, after the employment policy has been anounced, the decerase rate has been eased, increasing by 18.3% to 59,286.
In the meantime, the number of employee in top 30 conglomerates is about 900,000, while being predicted to increase 1.4%.
The investment downturn of top 30 conglomerates will be eased in the second half of this year.
In the economy commitee conviened on July 1, top 30 conglomerates revealed that they are going to invest 7.27 trillion won yearly.
Considering the fact that the investment in the first half of this year was 3.26 trillion won, it is predicted that the second half of this year will be about 4.01 trillion wond.
What's more, the R&D investment will inverse from 5.8% decrease in the first half of year to 9.8% increase in the second half of year.
The job market is also expected to be brisk.
The number of employment has been decreased by 23.6% to 30,508 as compared to the last year but anual plan of employment is predict to decrease by 29.4% to 59,286.
The employment plan of this year was supposed to be 50,127, decreased by 40.3%.
However, after the employment policy has been anounced, the decerase rate has been eased, increasing by 18.3% to 59,286.
In the meantime, the number of employee in top 30 conglomerates is about 900,000, while being predicted to increase 1.4%.
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The investment downturn by the top 30 conglomerates will ease in the second half of this year. 27 trillion won annually . 01 trillion won.
- The investment downturn by the top 30 conglomerates will ease in the second half of this year.
- 27 trillion won annually .
- 01 trillion won.
- 8% increase in the second half.
- The job market is also expected to be brisk.
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The investment downturn by the top 30 conglomerates will ease in the second half of this year. In the economy committee convened on July 1, the top 30 conglomerates revealed that they are going to invest 7.27 trillion won annually. Since their investment in the first half of this year was 3.26 trillion won, it is predicted that in the secon
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