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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please correct the sentences?
The purpose of the visit was get the status of the order for Rivets.
Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, As it appears to me that Mr. Harish who heads new vendor development department is not showing an interest in dealing with us. He is saying that he has to discuss with the marketing department for approval and he is carrying huge stocks.
Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, As it appears to me that Mr. Harish who heads new vendor development department is not showing an interest in dealing with us. He is saying that he has to discuss with the marketing department for approval and he is carrying huge stocks.
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The purpose of the visit was to get the status of the order for r ivets. Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, it seems to me that Mr. Harish, who heads new vendor development department, is not interested in dealing with us.
- The purpose of the visit was to get the status of the order for r ivets.
- Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, it seems to me that Mr.
- Harish, who heads new vendor development department, is not interested in dealing with us.
- ), and he has to discuss the approval with the marketing department.
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The purpose of the visit was to get the status of the order for rivets.
Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, it seems to me that Mr. Harish, who heads new vendor development department, is not interested in dealing with us. He says that he is carryi
Although the rivet samples we submitted have been qualified and commercially the order has been concluded, it seems to me that Mr. Harish, who heads new vendor development department, is not interested in dealing with us. He says that he is carryi
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