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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Could you please correct the sentences?

Alstom has 25 million dollars worth of business for the next ten years. They would prefer strategic partners who can provide all fastening solution under one shelter. Presently LPS Bossard are giving them complete fastening solutions.

Since they want to cut down the cost by 15%, they are looking for an alternative supplier approved by Alstom. We are one of the approved suppliers to Alstom, globally.
  

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This is how I would word it: Alstom has will do 25 million dollars worth of business for over the next ten years. They would prefer strategic partners who can provide all their fastening solution s under one shelter roof . Presently LPS Bossard is supplying that.

— Doctor D

  • This is how I would word it: Alstom has will do 25 million dollars worth of business for over the next ten years.
  • They would prefer strategic partners who can provide all their fastening solution s under one shelter roof .
  • Presently LPS Bossard is supplying that.
  • are giving them complete fastening solutions .
  • Since they Bossard want s to cut down the reduce cost s by 15%, they are looking for an alternative supplier approved by Alstom.
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This is how I would word it:

Alstom has will do 25 million dollars worth of business for over the next ten years. They would prefer strategic partners who can provide all their fastening solutions under one shelter roof. Presently LPS Bossard is supplying that. are giving them complete fastening solutio
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