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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Could you please correct the sentences?

Mr. Joseph and I visited Reliable Engineering stores to discuss with Mr. Hussain, managing partner of Reliable Engineering Stores who shown an interest of taking the dealership of our products.

Presently, they are the dealer of Recoil brand products. There is a distributor in China from whom Reliable Engineering Stores are getting Recoil products.

Mr. Hussain wants to promote our products in India. He has good contacts in India and he does the marketing activity. He will make sure that whatever enquiries we give to him, will be handled in a proper manner.

He wants to have the price list of our products and he is more interested in promoting the products that are being manufactured in India.
  

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Mr. Joseph and I visited Reliable Engineering S tores to discuss with Mr. Hussain, and had a meeting with their managing partne r, Mr.

  • Mr.
  • Joseph and I visited Reliable Engineering S tores to discuss with Mr.
  • Hussain, and had a meeting with their managing partne r, Mr.
  • Hussain, of Reliable Engineering Stores who shown showed an interest of in taking the dealership of for our products.
  • Presently, they are the dealer of for Recoil brand products.
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Mr. Joseph and I visited Reliable Engineering Stores to discuss with Mr. Hussain, and had a meeting with their managing partner, Mr. Hussain, of Reliable Engineering Stores who shown showed an interest of in taking the dealership of for our products.

Presently, they are the dealer

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