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The pie chart illustrates what students of Anthropology major from a university do after they finish their bachelor degree, while the table shows their salaries after 5 years of work.

Overall, the majority of Anthropology graduates did full-time jobs followed by part-time jobs and 4 other categories. In addition, working in the government sector and freelance had a higher salary than occupied by private companies.

Slightly half of graduates worked full time jobs, compared to 5% doing part time jobs while pursuing higher education. There were 15% Anthropology graduate students doing part time jobs, followed by 12% who are unemployed. Finally, 8% of survey respondents spent full time in post graduate and 8% are categorized as unknown.

Freelance consultants were hired in upper pay scales with 40% earning $75,000-99,999 and $100,000, whilst only 20% making in the range from $25,000 to 74,999. Graduates who work in the government sector share the same pattern of the percentage in the two lowest wages, 30% in $75,000-99,999 and 40% in $100,000. On the other hand, private companies have the lowest hired wage with 45% in lowest pay grades and 55% in two higher salary scales.