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Naked chef Posted 16 years ago
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Could you please correct my writing ?
This writing is IELTS Task 1 writing. it is impossible to show the bar chart for me. That's why I'm ok if you could correct the grammer error or some mistake in my writing?
The bar chart shows the different subjects were rank on a scale of easy to difficult by students from Australian university.
There are 7 subjects on the chart with different scale of easy to difficult. It is noticeable that chemistry is regarded as easy by a missive 70% of students and only 10% of students regarded it as moderately difficult; 20% of students viewed as difficult subject. By contrast, Math subject was ranked reversely. In addition, African languages was rated as the second easy subject after chemistry, showed 60% students. It can also be seen in the chart that physics and Art were viewed as difficult by 50? of students but only small percentage of students feelt that physics and Art are easy, 25% and 30%.
All in all, it is no clear correspondence between the type of subjects and whether it was generally rated as easy or difficult.
Thanks in advance!
Nake Chef!
The bar chart shows the different subjects were rank on a scale of easy to difficult by students from Australian university.
There are 7 subjects on the chart with different scale of easy to difficult. It is noticeable that chemistry is regarded as easy by a missive 70% of students and only 10% of students regarded it as moderately difficult; 20% of students viewed as difficult subject. By contrast, Math subject was ranked reversely. In addition, African languages was rated as the second easy subject after chemistry, showed 60% students. It can also be seen in the chart that physics and Art were viewed as difficult by 50? of students but only small percentage of students feelt that physics and Art are easy, 25% and 30%.
All in all, it is no clear correspondence between the type of subjects and whether it was generally rated as easy or difficult.
Thanks in advance!
Nake Chef!
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Naked chef This writing is IELTS Task 1 writing. it is impossible to show the bar chart for me. That's why I'm ok if you could correct the grammar error or some mistake in my writing?
- Naked chef This writing is IELTS Task 1 writing.
- it is impossible to show the bar chart for me.
- That's why I'm ok if you could correct the grammar error or some mistake in my writing?
- The bar chart shows the different subjects were ranked on a scale of easy to difficult by students from an Australian university.
- There are 7 subjects on the chart with different scale of easy to difficult.
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Naked chefThis writing is IELTS Task 1 writing. it is impossible to show the bar chart for me. That's why I'm ok if you could correct the grammar error or some mistake in my writing?
The bar chart shows the different subjects were ranked on a scale of easy to difficult by students from an Australian university. There are 7 subjects on the chart with different sc
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