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Messier42 Posted 13 years ago
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The Korean government is going to bolster the support for the equipment industry.

Throughout this plan, the government will raise the level of competition to the global top level and bring the adoption rate of its equipment device to 50%.

The new growth plan includes the semiconductor equipment, the display equipment, the LED equipment, the solar cell equipment, the BIO equipment and so on.

According to the government department, the market is predicted to emerge due to the energy and the environmental problems with a sudden growth of average 5.9% every year in decades to 574,500,000,000 dollars. However, the world market is under a few major international companies leading markets with their original technology. On the contrary, the core equipments manufactured by Korea, which mainly consists of the middle level of products, have been accounted for only barely 3.4% in the market share.

The government plans to go all out for the support for R&D in conjunction with the end user to commercialize the developed devices, and provide against the demand for 107 products which has the size of 2,000,000,000,000 won in the next 10 years. Also, They will bolster the financial support, the core employees building and the finding new export market in a bid to put the equipment companies on one of the top companies in the world.
  
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