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Smilingjenia Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Could you please correct my punctuation
Hi! Could you please correct my punctuation here! It's long sentence so I don't know how to do it right!
With the help of children, who are free to express their feelings and emotions, I became very interested in studying relation between the language and emotions, when the language works as a «window to the human mind».
Also I was impressed by the friendly and inspiring way of teaching which, in part, influenced my next career step.
I need you help! Thank you very much!!!!
With the help of children, who are free to express their feelings and emotions, I became very interested in studying relation between the language and emotions, when the language works as a «window to the human mind».
Also I was impressed by the friendly and inspiring way of teaching which, in part, influenced my next career step.
I need you help! Thank you very much!!!!
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Not bad, for such a long sentence, and it's basically correct as far as punctuation is concerned. ' I am a native speaker, and I generally try to avoid such complex sentences.
- Not bad, for such a long sentence, and it's basically correct as far as punctuation is concerned.
- ' I am a native speaker, and I generally try to avoid such complex sentences.
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Not bad, for such a long sentence, and it's basically correct as far as punctuation is concerned.
'studying the relationship betweenthe language and emotions, when the language ...'
I am a native speaker, and I generally try to avoid such complex sentences.
'studying the relationship between
I am a native speaker, and I generally try to avoid such complex sentences.
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