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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Could you please correct my grammar

My answer is not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer on last Friday. Because I was mixed up the step with BCD customer. I would like to revise it for you again. For my pervious arrangement / handled, I will informed the factory to prepared the specify samples and provide them a delivery note send the samples to the customer office directly after the mass production is no problem. The customer will allocate the sample and send 2pcs to their office by themselves. Finally, I will return the receipt to our marketing department for their reference.
  

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Hi, My answer is not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer on last Friday. Because I was mixed up the step with BCD customer. I would like to revise it for you again.

— Clive

  • Hi, My answer is not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer on last Friday.
  • Because I was mixed up the step with BCD customer.
  • I would like to revise it for you again.
  • For my p erv ious arrangement / handled, I will informed the factory to prepare d the specify samples and provide them a delivery note send the samples to the customer office directly after the mass production is no problem .
  • The customer will allocate the sample and send 2pcs to their US office by themselves.
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Hi,

My answer is not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer on last Friday. Because I was mixed up the step with BCD customer. I would like to revise it for you again. For my pervious arrangement / ha
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Hi Clive,

Thanks for your correction.

This is my revsion. Could you please review again and correct me when you have time. Thank you very much

My answer was not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer last Friday, because I confused it with an order for BCD customer. I would like to revise it. I will inform the factory to p
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Hi Clive

My answer is not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer on last Friday.

Just to confirm: It should be 'last Friday' with 'on' omitted.
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Hi again,

Thanks for your correction. This is my revsion. Could you please review again and correct me when you have time. Thank you very much

My answer was not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure of the samples to ABC customer last Friday, because I confused it with an order for BCD customer.
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Thanks for your help Clive
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Hi Clive,

How about this 2nd revision : My answer was not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure for the samples to ABC last Friday. Because I mixed up the step with BCD. I would like to revise it for you again. For my previous handling, I will ask the factory to prepare the specify samples and
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Hi,

It's better again. Here are a few more edits.

Clive

My answer was not totally correct when you asked me about the procedure for sending (?) the samples to ABC last Friday. Because I mixed this up with the steps for BCD. I would like to revise it for you again.
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Appreciate for your help Clive Emotion: big smile
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