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Mubrik88 Posted 18 years ago
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Hi
I want to add this topic
But first I want to know where are my mistakes so that I can learn from it .

Could you please correct these sentences ?

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Hi,
Has anyone seen this Italian movie
"Cannibal Holocaust"

My friend advise me to see it since I'm in love with horror movies

But I realy regretted for seeing this movie
This movie is sick
It's contain raping and killing animals alive
It is disgusting, not scary

What about you guys
Have you seen that movie?

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and can you also check my question ?
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I want to add this topic
But first I want to know where are my mistakes so that I can learn from it .
Could you please correct these sentences ?
  

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Hi, Has anyone seen this Italian movie "Cannibal Holocaust" My friend advise d me to see it since I'm in love with horror movies - sounds a bit strange - better - since I love horror movies . But I rea l ly regret ted for seeing this movie This movie is sick It 's contain s (scenes of) raping and killing animals alive - you can't kill dead animals! It is disgusting, not scary What about you guys Have you seen that movie?

— Optilang

  • Hi, Has anyone seen this Italian movie "Cannibal Holocaust" My friend advise d me to see it since I'm in love with horror movies - sounds a bit strange - better - since I love horror movies .
  • But I rea l ly regret ted for seeing this movie This movie is sick It 's contain s (scenes of) raping and killing animals alive - you can't kill dead animals!
  • It is disgusting, not scary What about you guys Have you seen that movie?
  • I want to add to this topic .
  • But first I want to know where are my mistakes are so that I can learn from it them.
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Hi,
Has anyone seen this Italian movie
"Cannibal Holocaust"
My friend advised me to see it since I'm in love with horror movies - sounds a bit strange - better - since I love horror movies.


But I really regretted for s
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optilangHi,
Has anyone seen this Italian movie
"Cannibal Holocaust"
My friend advised me to see it since I'm in love with horror movies - sounds a bit strange - better - since I love horror movies.


But I really regretted for seeing this movie
This movie is sick
It's contain
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