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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please comment on the following?
Hello,
Could you please comment on the following?
"Considering the differences of speech intelligibility among languages and considering that researchers of the present study have found no previous research on the effect of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and considering the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, this study is trying to examine the effect of earplug hearing protectors on the intelligibility of Persian words."
Thank you!
Could you please comment on the following?
"Considering the differences of speech intelligibility among languages and considering that researchers of the present study have found no previous research on the effect of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and considering the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, this study is trying to examine the effect of earplug hearing protectors on the intelligibility of Persian words."
Thank you!
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It's a very poor sentence, and much too long... Considering is a vague word. Do you mean eg because ?
- It's a very poor sentence, and much too long...
- Considering is a vague word.
- Do you mean eg because ?
- It's poor structure to string three 'considering'; phrases together.
- Instead of is trying to examine , say simply examines .
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It's a very poor sentence, and much too long...
Considering is a vague word. Do you mean eg because? It's poor structure to string three 'considering'; phrases together.
Instead of is trying to examine, say simply examines.
Considering is a vague word. Do you mean eg because? It's poor structure to string three 'considering'; phrases together.
Instead of is trying to examine, say simply examines.
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Many thanks!
I think the following is a little bit better. What do you think?
Because of the differences of speech intelligibility among languages and that no study has yet examined the effects of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and because of the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, th
I think the following is a little bit better. What do you think?
Because of the differences of speech intelligibility among languages and that no study has yet examined the effects of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and because of the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, th
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I don't see the need to say 'Because of the differences of speech intelligibility among languages'.
I suggest
Because no study has yet examined the effects of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and because of the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, this study examines the effect of earp
I suggest
Because no study has yet examined the effects of hearing protectors on the Intelligibility of Persian words and because of the contradictory research findings on the effect of hearing protection equipment on speech intelligibility, this study examines the effect of earp
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