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Claire moon Posted 14 years ago
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Human lives have evolved under light and darkness. And besides the physical clock, there is an internal clock or a chemical clock. If a crab taken away from A to B, where time is different, it spends weeks and weeks to adjust to the changed time. And once it adjusts to the changed time, it fares just as it used to before. Humans, too, have a similar clock, and it is called a body clock. There was a study where participants were asked to stay in underground for several months with no clock. During the study, the participants woke up 15minutes late every day until their body adjusted to the changed environment. Once their body adjusted, they began to have a regular wakeup and sleep cycle. Also in Artic Canada, winter has 24hours of darkness while summer has a long day. In these seasons, people’s behaviors also change- in winter, people sleep longer, but in summer, people become more active. It is a natural pattern human body has depending on the environment. Now we are living in society where late night shift, jet lag and irregular work schedules have become prevalent. People should know what these changes could do to their health.
Could you please check these summaries I made? I will deeply appreciate if you could help me!
I would like to know if I have made any grammatical mistakes or if any sentences don't make sense.
Please correct the mistakes. Thank you!!
Human lives have evolved under light and darkness. And besides the physical clock, there is an internal clock or a chemical clock. If a crab taken away from A to B, where time is different, it spends weeks and weeks to adjust to the changed time. And once it adjusts to the changed time, it fares just as it used to before. Humans, too, have a similar clock, and it is called a body clock. There was a study where participants were asked to stay in underground for several months with no clock. During the study, the participants woke up 15minutes late every day until their body adjusted to the changed environment. Once their body adjusted, they began to have a regular wakeup and sleep cycle. Also in Artic Canada, winter has 24hours of darkness while summer has a long day. In these seasons, people’s behaviors also change- in winter, people sleep longer, but in summer, people become more active. It is a natural pattern human body has depending on the environment. Now we are living in society where late night shift, jet lag and irregular work schedules have become prevalent. People should know what these changes could do to their health.
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Human beings evolved under light and darkness. And Besides the physical clock, there is an internal clock or a chemical clock. If a crab is taken away from A to B, where the time is different, it takes it weeks and weeks to adjust to the changed time.
- Human beings evolved under light and darkness.
- And Besides the physical clock, there is an internal clock or a chemical clock.
- If a crab is taken away from A to B, where the time is different, it takes it weeks and weeks to adjust to the changed time.
- And Once it adjusts to the changed time, it fares just as it used to before.
- Humans, too, have a similar clock , and it is called a body clock.
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Human beings evolved under light and darkness. And Besides the physical clock, there is an internal clock or a chemical clock. If a crab is taken away from A to B, where the time is different, it takes it weeks and weeks to adjust to
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