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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Could you please check these sentences

1. I need a legitimate credit card to buy these stuff. 2. Both group had a diffentent speculation about the new contestents. 3. There are people who beg in the street to get money by fooling around people. 4. The family is in anguish after their son kidnaped by an offender.5. The boss was really impressed when one of his employee gave an relevant information about the new project. 6. It's not legitimate to cross red light while driving.
  

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Hi, You have some errors. In addition, some of your wording is not natural. Here is what I might say.

  • Hi, You have some errors.
  • In addition, some of your wording is not natural.
  • Here is what I might say.
  • 1.
  • I need a valid credit card to buy this stuff.
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Hi,

You have some errors. In addition, some of your wording is not natural.

Here is what I might say.

1. I need a valid credit card to buy this stuff.
2. The two groups had different speculations

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