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00 I need a great help. I translated the summary of a monograph, which I have to hand in tomorrow - and I 'd like to know if there are any mistakes, please!!! 02 br
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01 i 00 Here it goes: 02 i 02 br
00 This monograph tries to show the reality of a current and polemical topic in Brazil: adoption by 01 u 00 homoaffective pairs 02 u 00 01 b 00 (here may I write 01 u 00 gay pairs 02 u 00 instead of 01 u 00 homoaffective pairs 02 u 00 ? In fact I don’t know if this expression “homoaffective pairs” exist, sorry!). 02 b 00 To a better understanding of the topic, at 00 first instance, a brief historical 00 00 is done concerning the evolution of family patterns. The changes that happened in the Brazilian family 01 u 00 are broached 02 u 00 00 (or it’s 00 00 better to say here 00 01 b 01 u 00 are accosted?) 02 u 02 b 00 , showing the new existent patterns nowadays. 00 In the following chapter, besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to the homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 it’s showed up the acceptance to the gay union in the international scenery and in Brazilian juridical system. 01 u 00 Broaches 02 u 00 00 (or 00 01 b 01 u 00 Accosts?) 02 u 02 b 00 00 the adoption problem in Brazil, as well as its requirements and purpose, that is to assure the child and adolescent’s right to the familiar and communitarian familiarity. 00 In the last chapter, the core of this monograph is reached, the adoption by gay pairs. First, it tries to accost 00 00 the 00 00 problem that has permeated most of the adoptions 00 00 by homosexuals in Brazil: when a gay pair wants to adopt, one of the homosexuals has to be chosen in order to formalize the petition for adoption, but, in the practice, both finish educating and raising together this child. It becomes evident 00 00 that the bond between the child and the partner of his adopter doesn’t find a proper juridical custody that preserves the best interests of the minor. Also, the legal possibility is seen of gay pairs coming to jointly adopt, presenting studies about adoption’s psychological viability by these pairs and giving an account of the first favorable judicial decisions to adoption by them. 00 Key words: Adoption, gay pairs; homosexuality;family;child; adolescent. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much ! 02 br
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00 I need a great help. I translated the summary of a monograph, which I have to hand in tomorrow - and I 'd like to know if there are any mistakes, please!!! 02 br
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01 i 00 Here it goes: 02 i 02 br
00 This monograph tries to show the reality of a current and polemical topic in Brazil: adoption by 01 u 00 homoaffective pairs 02 u 00 01 b 00 (here may I write 01 u 00 gay pairs 02 u 00 instead of 01 u 00 homoaffective pairs 02 u 00 ? In fact I don’t know if this expression “homoaffective pairs” exist, sorry!). 02 b 00 To a better understanding of the topic, at 00 first instance, a brief historical 00 00 is done concerning the evolution of family patterns. The changes that happened in the Brazilian family 01 u 00 are broached 02 u 00 00 (or it’s 00 00 better to say here 00 01 b 01 u 00 are accosted?) 02 u 02 b 00 , showing the new existent patterns nowadays. 00 In the following chapter, besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to the homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 it’s showed up the acceptance to the gay union in the international scenery and in Brazilian juridical system. 01 u 00 Broaches 02 u 00 00 (or 00 01 b 01 u 00 Accosts?) 02 u 02 b 00 00 the adoption problem in Brazil, as well as its requirements and purpose, that is to assure the child and adolescent’s right to the familiar and communitarian familiarity. 00 In the last chapter, the core of this monograph is reached, the adoption by gay pairs. First, it tries to accost 00 00 the 00 00 problem that has permeated most of the adoptions 00 00 by homosexuals in Brazil: when a gay pair wants to adopt, one of the homosexuals has to be chosen in order to formalize the petition for adoption, but, in the practice, both finish educating and raising together this child. It becomes evident 00 00 that the bond between the child and the partner of his adopter doesn’t find a proper juridical custody that preserves the best interests of the minor. Also, the legal possibility is seen of gay pairs coming to jointly adopt, presenting studies about adoption’s psychological viability by these pairs and giving an account of the first favorable judicial decisions to adoption by them. 00 Key words: Adoption, gay pairs; homosexuality;family;child; adolescent. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much ! 02 br
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0 In answer to your first question, the expression I would use is homosexual couples, or perhaps gay couples. a brief history is given concerning the evolution of family patterns, and the changes that have recently happened in the Brazilian family are discussed. The next chapter provides a study of historical prejudice against homosexuality, and suggests that the equality principle is prevailing internationally.
- 0 In answer to your first question, the expression I would use is homosexual couples, or perhaps gay couples.
- a brief history is given concerning the evolution of family patterns, and the changes that have recently happened in the Brazilian family are discussed.
- The next chapter provides a study of historical prejudice against homosexuality, and suggests that the equality principle is prevailing internationally.
- It also suggests that equal treatment for homosexuals is becoming part of the Brazilian justice system, and that this change has affected the adoption problem where the requirement is to assure an adolescent's rights.
- In the final chapter the core idea of the monograph is reached, adoption by gay couples.
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0 In answer to your first question, the expression I would use is homosexual couples, or perhaps gay couples. Second sentence--For a better understanding...a brief history is given concerning the evolution of family patterns, and the changes that have recently happened in the Brazilian family are discussed. The next chapter provides a study of historical prejudice against homosexuality, and su
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