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Moonvoyage Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you please check the summary of an essay?
Hello! What do you think about my summary of an argumentative essay? Please, don't take the topic for propaganda of drugs, as I just fulfill my homework for the University classes. I'll be glad for you sharing your thoughts on the problem. Thank you!
In 2000, George Bierson concluded that marijuana was harmful for brains, reproductive system, and the immune system, being in addition a gateway drug. However, the author of the essay doesn’t agree with the statement.
Bierson’s strongest claim is of the physical harms of marijuana proved by the tests of the monkey's brain. However, the monkeys were given extremely high doses, and the test’s sample size was too small. More current studies of human smokers – not animals – show no evidence of brain damage.
The argument against marijuana as a gateway to harder drug use also fails, as most of heroin and cocaine abusers had also previously used alcohol and tobacco; and the legislation of marijuana in Holland proved the decrease of the hard drugs use.
However, the author agrees that it is not true to claim that marijuana is harmless as one can become psychologically addicted. So, marijuana remains a controversial issue today, whether to legalize or criminalize it.
You can view the whole essay here: http://www.mesacc.edu/~paoih30491/ArgumentEssay2.pdf
In 2000, George Bierson concluded that marijuana was harmful for brains, reproductive system, and the immune system, being in addition a gateway drug. However, the author of the essay doesn’t agree with the statement.
Bierson’s strongest claim is of the physical harms of marijuana proved by the tests of the monkey's brain. However, the monkeys were given extremely high doses, and the test’s sample size was too small. More current studies of human smokers – not animals – show no evidence of brain damage.
The argument against marijuana as a gateway to harder drug use also fails, as most of heroin and cocaine abusers had also previously used alcohol and tobacco; and the legislation of marijuana in Holland proved the decrease of the hard drugs use.
However, the author agrees that it is not true to claim that marijuana is harmless as one can become psychologically addicted. So, marijuana remains a controversial issue today, whether to legalize or criminalize it.
You can view the whole essay here: http://www.mesacc.edu/~paoih30491/ArgumentEssay2.pdf
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You give a detailed summary that allows to catch the essence Of the original. It is good
- You give a detailed summary that allows to catch the essence Of the original.
- It is good
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You give a detailed summary that allows to catch the essence Of the original. Everything is structured!It is good
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In 2000, George Bierson concluded that marijuana was harmful to the brain, the reproductive system, and the immune system, and, being in addition, was a gateway drug. However, the author of the essay doesn’t agree with the statement.
Bierson’s strongest claim is of the physical harms of marijuana proved by the tests of the monkey's brain. However, the mon
Bierson’s strongest claim is of the physical harms of marijuana proved by the tests of the monkey's brain. However, the mon
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Thank you for checking the essay! As I am not a native speaker, so I can misinterpret some points of the essay. I'll be more attentive next time
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Your summary is good, all points are reflected. As for me, I don't agree with the author because marihuana is drug which makes people addicted.
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Diana ZotovaAs for me, I don't agree with the author because marihuana is drug which makes people addicted.Where did you get that information? That marijuana is addictive?
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I would say that this summary is very careful, it doesn't cause any contradictions. I'd like to discuss this theme in such a tolerant but persuasive way)
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I would say that this summary is very careful, it doesn't cause any contradictions. I'd like to discuss this theme in such a tolerant but persuasive way)
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Hi 
I've read your essay and now I'm convinced that there are a lot of people who think that marijuana is just a simple drug an
I've read your essay and now I'm convinced that there are a lot of people who think that marijuana is just a simple drug an00
Your summary is very good. To my mind, due to it the reader can catch the main ideas emphasized in the given essay.
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