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Subash2008 Posted 13 years ago
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Could you please check the below paragraph for any mistakes

I have a lover, who always talks about the things that no longer exists. Her eyes captured things that doesn't exists, speaks the language that no where exists in this world. She did wonders that any other magicians in this world failed to do. Later I realized that she wanted to love a person who no longer exists. So I blamed myself for my existence. So I want to dissolve in breeze so that I could wander and see the world that really exists.

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Subash.
  

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You have a mixture of present and past tenses here, so I have produced two versions. I have a lover who always talks about the things that no longer exists exist . Her eyes capture d capture things that doesn't don't exists exist , she speaks the a language that no where nowhere exists in this world.

— Blue Jay

  • You have a mixture of present and past tenses here, so I have produced two versions.
  • I have a lover who always talks about the things that no longer exists exist .
  • Her eyes capture d capture things that doesn't don't exists exist , she speaks the a language that no where nowhere exists in this world.
  • She did wonders that any all other magicians in this world failed to do.
  • Later I realize d that she wanted wants to love a person who no longer exists , s o I blame d myself for my existence.
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You have a mixture of present and past tenses here, so I have produced two versions.

I have a lover who always talks about the things that no longer exists exist. Her eyes captured
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Thank you Sir. You're awesome. I appreciate for your time and effort.
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