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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The line graph demonstrates the amount of acid rain emissions in the UK from 1990 to 2007.

Overall, there was a downward trend in the amount of acid rain emissions in Britain. Whereas the figure for electricity, gas and water supply sector experienced a significant drop, the amount of acid rain triggered by transport and education fluctuated and remained the in the last year.

In 1990, the domestic sector was responsible for roughly 0.5 million tones of acid rain accounting for a quarter of the figure for other industries. The amount of acid rain emissions from domestic sector and other industries both decreased between 1990 and 2007, with the figure for other industries sector dropped at a more significant rate. In 2007, there were approximately 1.25 million tones of acid rain in other industries sector, which were about 1 million tones more than that of the domestic sector.

Between 1990 and 1997, whereas the amount of acid rain emissions resulting from electricity, gas and water supply deceased dramatically, the figure for transport and communication slightly fluctuated and remained its stability at roughly 0.75million tones most of the time. From 2003 onwards, the amount of aid rain emissions from electricity, gas and water supply dropped to 0.5 million tones, which was slightly lower than that of transport and communication.