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Accommodation, restaurant, and entertainment are prominent businesses in MahaSarakham. Firstly, there are two an universities and three or four collages in Mahasarakham. People in Mahasarakham, mostly students. A lot of students come from up-country, so they needed accommodation that’s why MahaSarakham have lots of apartments, dormitory, and house for rent. Dormitory price range starting the 1800-5000 beat. For example, if you live in rooms are fully furniture, spacious rooms, big size, the beautiful room , the price rates at 4000-5000. If you live in rooms have some furniture, middle size room, the price rates at 3000-3900. And finally, if you live in a room has furniture, or some room no furniture, have a small size room, the price rates at 1800-2900. I think an accommodation business is businesses that can make a lot of money and you have income a long time. Next is restaurant businesses, there are restaurant a lot in MahaSarakham because some students can’t cook or don’t know how to cook for themselves. Some restaurant sells only food. But some restaurant sell of beverages and food, such as smoothies, coffee and milkshake etc. I have ever gone both restaurants, but I likes restaurant that sell of beverages and food more. Because I likes both eating and drinking. I went second restaurant, I ordered dinner and a milkshake. At the restaurant not have only food and drink, but also have music. After I finished classes, I felt hungry and tired. And Then I went the restaurant, It makes me relax by eating and by listening. I believe that a lot of students think or do like me, that’s why restaurant businesses are prominent businesses. Finally entertainment businesses, there are many pub and bar in MahaSarakham. These can open since 18.00-00.00 o’clock. A lot of pub and bar are near at Somthawin canal. Some students like drinking and listening music with them friends, so they like to go bar for drink some beer. They can split the bill after the parties have finished. That is a reason why entertainment are prominent businesses in MahaSarakham, because these have a lot of income from student like a night party.