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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Could you please check my writing?

What did you want to be as kids?
When is the happiest moment so far?
What is the unhappiest thinking your whole life?
What is thigs that you want, but you don't need?
Who do you want to come to you to help you when you are in trouble or in a difficult time?
What does your mum remind you of?
What song makes you feel sad and dperessed?
  

Top answer

1 is ok . ” 3 not ok: another mix of tenses. ” 5 is ok.

— Wilpeter

  • 1 is ok .
  • ” 3 not ok: another mix of tenses.
  • ” 5 is ok.
  • 6 is grammatical but ambiguous in meaning.
  • ”
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1 is ok .
2 not ok: “When is (present tense) the happiest moment so far (a period from past to present)?” Correction: “When has been…?”
3 not ok: another mix of tenses. Correction: “What was the unhappiest thought…?”
4 not ok: Corrections: ‘thigs = things’ is a plural word, so “What are…?”
5 is ok.
6 is grammatical but ambiguous in meaning.
7 not ok: Correction:
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domdomWhat did you want to be as kids?
OK if you're addressing two or more people.
domdomWhen is the happiest moment so far?
OK.
domdomWhat is the unhappiest thought that you've ever had? thinking your whole life?
domdomWhat is are
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What does your mum remind you of?

I'm trying to say there "What do you associate when you think about your mum?".
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domdomWhat does your mum remind you of?
"Who or what does your mum make you think of?"
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