Could you please check my sentence?
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Could you please check my sentence?
Any suggestions are welcome.
"He did not discriminate nor did he recognize any difference between himself and a stranger, but he considered everyone as equal and behaved in the same way towards all."
Thanks in advance.
Top answer
I would put a comma before "nor". The only other small comment I would make is that not recognising any difference between himself and a stranger is a slightly different idea from the one expressed in the rest of the sentence. This doesn't mean it's wrong though.
- I would put a comma before "nor".
- The only other small comment I would make is that not recognising any difference between himself and a stranger is a slightly different idea from the one expressed in the rest of the sentence.
- This doesn't mean it's wrong though.
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I would put a comma before "nor".
The only other small comment I would make is that not recognising any difference between himself and a stranger is a slightly different idea from the one expressed in the rest of the sentence. This doesn't mean it's wrong though.
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