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Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
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Could you please check my opinion? : )

Q. Some tourist prefer to travel by themselves rather than with a tour group. Others would rather travel in a group led by a tour guide.

Which do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Answer

I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.

The first reason is that I don't have to be bound by a schedule. I would like to go where I would like to go ,but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to museum, I would have to go there, but I don't like going to museum because it's boring for me.

The second reason is that/Second, I would like to enjoy spending time as much as I would like, but if I am in a tour group, I would have to move from one place to another without enough break. Even though I feel tired.

For such reasons, I prefer traveling by myself/alone to traveling with a tour group.

p.s. /<<this mark, I would like to know which one is correct or both ok.
  

Top answer

I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group. The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule. I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule.

  • I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.
  • The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule.
  • I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule.
  • And if the schedule includes going to a museum, I will have to go there , even if it is boring for me.
  • Second, I would like to spend as much time as I like , but if I am in a tour group, I have to move from one place to another without enough breaks, even if I feel tired.
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I think traveling by myself/alone is better than traveling with a tour group.

The first reason is that I am not bound by a schedule. I can go where I would like to go, but if I go on a group tour, I have to follow the schedule. And if the schedule includes going to a museum, I will have to go there, even if it is boring for me.

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