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Please send me a copy of your passport ID page at your earliest convenience otherwise, your business trip money will not be paid into your bank account without it.
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Tural Musayev Please send me a copy of your passport ID page at your earliest convenience . O therwise, your business trip money will not be paid into your bank account without it. 'otherwise' and 'without it' both say the same thing.
- Tural Musayev Please send me a copy of your passport ID page at your earliest convenience .
- O therwise, your business trip money will not be paid into your bank account without it.
- 'otherwise' and 'without it' both say the same thing.
- You will have to remove one of the two.
- 'business trip money' is not a very natural expression.
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Tural MusayevPlease send me a copy of your passport ID page at your earliest convenience. Otherwise, your business trip money will not be paid into your bank account without it.
'otherwise' and 'without it' both say the same thing. You will have to remove one of the two.
'business trip money' is not
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