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Meimei MianDianRen Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Could you please check my letter?

Dear sir,

Could you please check my letter below?

Today, , I couldn’t open my eyes but tried to eyelids up and immediately stand in front of the mirror and looked at my face. Suddenly I was shocked as my face was very big and red.

I thought what had happened with my face? While I am thinking, my face was a little bit itching. I know that was allergies.

Time was flies as I have to go to work and I didn’t have enough time to do to treatment. But I thought how am I going out with face like that? I was shy but I went out from my house.

When I arrived to my office, they asked me a lot of question. I think I had allergies.

They told that, Now; you are beautiful face looks like apple. So they called me apple.

  

Top answer

Your meaning is crystal clear, but we have some work to do.

  • Your meaning is crystal clear, but we have some work to do.
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Your meaning is crystal clear, but we have some work to do.
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This morning I couldn't open my eyes. I kept trying to raise my eyelids. Finally succeeding, I rushed to look at myself in the mirror. I was shocked to discover that my face had become very big and red. As I pondered what could have happened to me, my face began to itch, and I knew it had to be allergies.

Although I had medicine, time was getting away from me. If I stopped to do a t
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Thank you so much for your time and quick reply.

*** Bless!

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