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Write about the following topic in 40 minutes.
Some people believe that visitors to others countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
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Should tourists follow the host country's cultures? We have been bombarded with the theme on television, over the Internet and in newspapers for years, and yet it is considered as the riddle of the Sphinx. In this essay, I would like to weight the benefits of conforming to local cultures against the dangers, or harm that might come with that.
Some people firmly believe that adhering to the cultures of the local communities contributes positively to these visitors and local residents. The most evident reason has to do with the tension between these two groups. According to some reports, the relationship between them are getting worse and worse owing to the fact tourists do not perform as decently as what local people think. Further research reveals that this should be attributed to that visitors are not familiar with local culture and take for granted that these cultures should be the same as theirs. As a result, by following the local customs and behavior, the alienation will be significantly alleviated.
On the other hand, some people claim that cultural differences should be encouraged. The reason might involve the recognition that cultural diversity is of paramount value in our present society where some cultures are dying out. Here, I part company. Keeping cultural conformity between these two peoples rather than cultural diversity should be put on top priority-not to mention that the latter task is too complicated for tourists and local residents to fulfill.
In the final analysis, although I would concede that cultural diversity might be welcome, conforming to local cultures holds more tantalising promise for the well-being of local communities and overseas visitors. Overall, it is high time that international organisations, travel agencies and people concerned strike a balance between these two ideologies.
Some people believe that visitors to others countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
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Should tourists follow the host country's cultures? We have been bombarded with the theme on television, over the Internet and in newspapers for years, and yet it is considered as the riddle of the Sphinx. In this essay, I would like to weight the benefits of conforming to local cultures against the dangers, or harm that might come with that.
Some people firmly believe that adhering to the cultures of the local communities contributes positively to these visitors and local residents. The most evident reason has to do with the tension between these two groups. According to some reports, the relationship between them are getting worse and worse owing to the fact tourists do not perform as decently as what local people think. Further research reveals that this should be attributed to that visitors are not familiar with local culture and take for granted that these cultures should be the same as theirs. As a result, by following the local customs and behavior, the alienation will be significantly alleviated.
On the other hand, some people claim that cultural differences should be encouraged. The reason might involve the recognition that cultural diversity is of paramount value in our present society where some cultures are dying out. Here, I part company. Keeping cultural conformity between these two peoples rather than cultural diversity should be put on top priority-not to mention that the latter task is too complicated for tourists and local residents to fulfill.
In the final analysis, although I would concede that cultural diversity might be welcome, conforming to local cultures holds more tantalising promise for the well-being of local communities and overseas visitors. Overall, it is high time that international organisations, travel agencies and people concerned strike a balance between these two ideologies.
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Try googling the topic to see what other people say about this. Using simpler words and sentences may also help your writing.
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- Using simpler words and sentences may also help your writing.
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Try googling the topic to see what other people say about this.
Using simpler words and sentences may also help your writing.
Using simpler words and sentences may also help your writing.
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