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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

Could you please check my English wiriting?

Hurts's new album is coming out on 9 October. Their face book is announcing that the album has already been on pre-order and I really like its cover! Oh, I am really happy with/about it(it = the new album coming out soon). How beautiful the cover is! I like the colour and the atmosphere of it(it = the cover picture of the new album) I have it on my phone as a background now. I can't tell you how much I like you guys!

Hyuk Oh is cute. I thought he was charming and cute when I saw him first in Infinite Challenge, though. I have listen to songs of Hyuk Oh several times so far and repeated A Beautiful Farewell, his voice is wonderful.. So it made me try to listen to the original of that song by Kim Gun mo, and today watched the band on Infinite Challenge. They came to The Seoul Jazz Festival this time but I was working at that time(the point that the band was playing). I like how they wear and their look which is charming, unique and cute.

Thank you!
  

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domdom Their face book is Their Facebook page is domdom Oh, I am really happy with/about it Oh, I am really happy about it

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  • domdom Their face book is Their Facebook page is domdom Oh, I am really happy with/about it Oh, I am really happy about it
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domdomTheir face book is
Their Facebook page is
domdomOh, I am really happy with/about it
Oh, I am really happy about it
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Thank you for your correction and I have a question. What's the different between 'happy about' and 'happy with'?
I am always curious about it.
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domdomthe atmosphere of it
In your context, "atmosphere" is unnatural. Consider using another word.
domdom I thought he was charming and cute when I saw him first in Infinite Challenge, though.
"Though" means "but" and is used to introduce an opposite concept. I can't see its purpose in your sentence.
domdom
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