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If possible, could you please check my English? I'm writing an announcement for a group of professionals visiting Japan for professional training. We need to inform them of some specifics and I was asked to write a brief message.
"Welcome to Japan!
It is our sincere hope that you will enjoy your stay in Japan. We also hope that the knowledge and experience obtained during this program will greatly benefit your professional life.
We would like to inform you of the following:
1. You are kindly requested to attend the Briefing Session, which will be held in ___Room on ____ January.
2. Your schedule after the Briefing Session is:
13.30-15.30 Program Orientation
Sincerely yours,
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"Welcome to Japan! It is our sincere hope that you will enjoy your stay in Japan. We also hope that the knowledge and experience obtained during this program will greatly benefit your professional life.
- "Welcome to Japan!
- It is our sincere hope that you will enjoy your stay in Japan.
- We also hope that the knowledge and experience obtained during this program will greatly benefit your professional life.
- We would like to inform you of the following: 1.
- You are kindly requested to attend the introductory b riefing s ession (10:00-12:00), which will be held in the Grand Ballr oom on 31 January.
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"Welcome to Japan!
It is our sincere hope that you will enjoy your stay in Japan. We also hope that the knowledge and experience obtained during this program will greatly benefit your professional life.
We would like to inform you of the following:
1. You are kindly requested to attend the introductory briefing session (10:00-12:00), which will be held in
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