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Naked chef Posted 17 years ago
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Could you please check my English!

Dear all!

I'm going to send attached file which is scheldue for volunteers training to my colleagues. Under the schedule I mention the person's name who is going to training the volunteers.
I would like you to check my English before I email them as I'm not so confindent my writing.

Here is my writing.


Please see attached file of new volunteer training sessions. It will be starting from this evening. I have mentioned about the name of person who is going to train them under the schedule.
But one person will not be in the list because she is going to trip. When she comes back she will inform me and we will be trainging her for new program.

Thanks in advance
Best wishes,
Naked Chef!
  

Top answer

Try: Please see the attached file for the new volunteer training sessions which will start this evening. This file also mentions that *** (the name of the person) who will head the training sessions. However, *** (name of person) is not on the list because she is going away on a trip elsewhere, but when she comes back, she will inform me, and we will be train her for the new program.

  • Try: Please see the attached file for the new volunteer training sessions which will start this evening.
  • This file also mentions that *** (the name of the person) who will head the training sessions.
  • However, *** (name of person) is not on the list because she is going away on a trip elsewhere, but when she comes back, she will inform me, and we will be train her for the new program.
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Try:

Please see the attached file for the new volunteer training sessions which will start this evening. This file also mentions that *** (the name of the person) who will head the training sessions. However, *** (name of person) is not on the list because she is going away on a trip elsewhere, but when she comes back, she will inform me, and we will be train her for the new program.
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please find the attached file.
This file i have to listed who r going to volunteer training for ( put place).This is new batch its start up this evening, but (person name) is not yet come this training because she is going to trip, when she will come i can arrange for new program.

regards
(your name)
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