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Jasmine8319 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

could you please check my cover letter again?

0Dear Sir/Madam,02br
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00Having a BTS Tourism, I am writing to you apply for apostion as a crew member.02br
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00Young, dynamic and enthusiastic, I would highly like to begin in the active life. My excellent communication skills with the customers, my availability, having a perfect computer skills will be, I hope for it, decisive in your eyes.02br
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00I speak two foreign languages French, English and has an intermediate level in Spanish. My resume which is enclosed, showing further information of my education, experience and backgroud.02br
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00Very organized and methodical, I will able to be adapt whatever my assignment. I learned what giving good customers sevice means and developed a real sense of team sprit.02br
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00I hope that you find my resume of interest and I look forward to the possibility of a personal interview to discuss my skills and interests further.02br
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00Thanks you very much for considering my application.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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00Jasmine0-
  

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12br 12br 10Young, dynamic and enthusiastic, 11font 10I would like to start my career life. 12br 12br 10I speak two foreign languages French, English and has an intermediate level in Spanish. 12br 12br 10Very organized and methodical, I will able to be adapt whatever my assignment.

  • 12br 12br 10Young, dynamic and enthusiastic, 11font 10I would like to start my career life.
  • 12br 12br 10I speak two foreign languages French, English and has an intermediate level in Spanish.
  • 12br 12br 10Very organized and methodical, I will able to be adapt whatever my assignment.
  • 12br 12br 10Yours faithfully,12br 12br 10Jasmine12br 12br 12blockquote 10 010id10
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01cite10Jasmine831912cite10I didn't like the one sentence here and looking for any other alternatives 15010 here I changed a bit but i am not sure does it sound nice for cover letter?12br
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10thanks again, jasmine12br
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10Dear Sir/Madam,12br
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10Having a BTS Tour
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0I think it does! Anyway whatever it is, I have sent it already 05002br
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hi Jass
did u get a positive reply for the above ?

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