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Forum_mail Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

could you please check my corrections of a letter?

0 I have marked my corrections in the red color. (do we say "in the red color" or "in red color" or "in red" or "with red color" or "with red" or maybe with 01i00a/an02i00 instead 01i00of the02i00?)02br
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00Dear XYZ02br
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00How are you? 01u00I hope you're well and looking forward to your next holiday.02u01sup00102sup00 I was on holiday in London. 01u00The weather was warm and sunny02u00.01sup00202sup00 I saw very exciting place01font00S02font00 and many 01font00(is it ok to place 01i00'many'02i00 in this context?)02font00 other attractions. 01u00I visited Big Ben02u01sup00302sup00, The Royal Castle ans shops. I saw 01font00AN 02font00interesting carving exhibition in London. There were many different carvings on display. I stayed in 01font00THE02font00 hotel "Sun" in London. The hotel was a01font00*02font00 very comfortable. The foods 01font00(can we say 01i00'foods'02i00 in this context? I guess the writer's intention was the meaning - dishes, but I may be wrong)02font00 was delicious. I felt lucky 01font05002font00 that I toured that big city. I spent there 01font00A (?) 02font00super time and I had a great funny 01font00(fun)02font00. I came back home at01font00* (without 01i00'at'02i00 ?)02font00 last weekend and I 01font00AM 02font00resting now . Anyway, I have to finish now. Give my regards 01font00(AND ?)02font00 love to your parents. 02br
00Take care, 02br
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00Love, XYZ02br
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00Additional questions:02br
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01b001.02b00 Can we say 01i00"I hope you're well and looking forward to your next holiday" 02i00?02br
01b002.02b00 Can we use 01i00"warm"02i00 and 01i00"sunny" 02i00to describe weather? I'd rather say "The weather was fine/good. It was warm and sunny"02br
01b003.02b00 00Do we visit Big Ben or rather only "see" it? I don't think you can actually VISIT Big Ben... ,yet I might be wrong...02br
01b004.02b00 Are there any other mistakes in the above letter? What else would you correct? Are my corrections OK?02br
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00Best wishes! 010id77
  

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01cite10Forum_mail12cite10I have marked my corrections in the red color. (do we say "in the red color" or "in red color" or "in red" or "with red color" or "with red" or maybe with 11i10a/an12i10 instead 11i10of the12i10?)12br
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00I would appreciate it if you could take a look at the rest <hugs> 02br
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0 Dear XYZ02br
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00How are you? 01u00I hope you're well and looking forward to your next holiday.02u01sup00102sup00 I was on holiday in London. 01u00The weather was warm and sunny02u00.01sup00202sup00 I saw very exciting place01font00S02font
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0 Dear XYZ02br
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00How are you? 01u00I hope you're well and looking forward to your next holiday.02u01sup00102sup00 I was on holiday in London 01font00.02font00 01u00The weather was warm and sunny02u00.01sup00202sup00 I saw 01font
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0 thanks a hundred to Grammar Geek and Lil' Ruby Rose :- ) <smile>02br
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00 Lil' - I guess that the girl who has wrote the text ment Buckingham Palace.02br
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00By the way - just a tiny question - we can say both, can't we? :02br
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0 I guess that the girl who 01del01font00has02font02del00 wrote the text me01font00a02font00nt Buckingham Palace.02br
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00By the way - just a tiny question - we can say both, can't we? :02br
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