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The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph below illustrates how money was spent on multiple areas of entertainment from years 1995 to 2000 in Asia, Europe and US.

Overall, we can say that all of the countries has increased their spending on entertainment from 1995 to 2000. Among all, highest amount of spending on entertainment is in US followed up by Europe and Asia.

Asia has the least total amount of expenditure in 1995 at 67 which almost got doubled in 2000. While in Europe it was 97 which later on risen up to 131. However, spending in US was more than the combined expenditure of other two counties as 184 in 1995 and 257 in 2000.

Furthermore, money expenditure on Publishing in total was in majority followed by television and music. While the figure for cinema was the lowest in all of three distinctive areas. Compartively, netizens spending on videos has slightly risen up in the past few years altogether in Asia, Europe and US.