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"According to the results of experiments (Fig.5), the rate of the deposition on the front surface of the first wafer is more than other areas (Fig.5). Apart from the first wafer, the rate of the deposition on the wafers’ edges is higher than the central surfaces of the wafers. However, the determinant of quality of the deposition is the central area (fig.6). The average rate of the deposition for the 149 wafers (2 to 150) along the furnace is . This equals to that is consistent with the other references (ref. x) and factual experiments, which is between 30 and 40. Tolerance of deposition rate between 149 wafers along the furnace is about 1.6% (fig.7)."
"According to the results of experiments (Fig.5), the rate of the deposition on the front surface of the first wafer is more than other areas (Fig.5). Apart from the first wafer, the rate of the deposition on the wafers’ edges is higher than the central surfaces of the wafers. However, the determinant of quality of the deposition is the central area (fig.6). The average rate of the deposition for the 149 wafers (2 to 150) along the furnace is . This equals to that is consistent with the other references (ref. x) and factual experiments, which is between 30 and 40. Tolerance of deposition rate between 149 wafers along the furnace is about 1.6% (fig.7)."
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According to the results of experiments (fig. 5), the rate of deposition on the front surface of the first wafer is higher than that on other areas (fig. 5).
- According to the results of experiments (fig.
- 5), the rate of deposition on the front surface of the first wafer is higher than that on other areas (fig.
- 5).
- Apart from the first wafer, the rate of the deposition on the wafers’ edges is higher than on the central surfaces of the wafers.
- However, the determinant of the quality of the deposition is the central area (fig.
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According to the results of experiments (fig. 5), the rate of deposition on the front surface of the first wafer is higher than that on other areas (fig. 5). Apart from the first wafer, the rate of the deposition on the wafers’ edges is higher than on the central surfaces of the wafers. However, the determinant of the quality of the deposition is the central area (fig. 6). The average rate of depo
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I have a very serious problem with "the"! Specially when I want to describe (the! I missed it at first) attributes of things, like speed. Is there any situation that I shouldn't use article? e.g. Speed of the ...
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This is equivalent to X, which is consistent with the rate reported in other references (ref. x) and in
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Don't worry about it. The instinct will develop over time as you become more fluent. To tell you the truth, I'm tempted to flip a coin myself half the time editing your stuff. Pretty often, it works both ways. Your sentence right there is an example: "when I want to describe (the) attributes of things ...".
Don't worry about it. The instinct will develop over time as you become more fluent. To tell you the truth, I'm tempted to flip a coin myself half the time editing your stuff. Pretty often, it works both ways. Your sentence right there is an example: "when I want to describe (the) attributes of things ...".
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I'm going to tell you a secret we aren't supposed to tell any foreigner. We invented the article to make English impossible to acquire after childhood. No adult ESLer has ever become so fluent that we don't catch them using "the" when they shouldn't or not using it when they should. We did it to enable us to detect infiltrators.
But seriously, folks, whole big books could be written on th
But seriously, folks, whole big books could be written on th
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