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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Could you please, check it?

Dear teachers,

In the following dialogues could you please, check the green sentences and tell me if they are correct? (if possible show me alternatives for them. Okay?) Thank you so much!

Supposing a dialogue between a cabdriver (A) and a passenger (B):

Dialogue nº 1:

(A) Good morning, sir. May I help you?
(B) Good morning. Please, take me to the centre/center.

(A) where abouts? (if possible could you show me options here? Because "where abouts" is too informal)
(B) To the National Art Gallery, please.
(A) Do you know where it is? (or do you know where is it ?)
(B) It's on Merrion Square West & Clare street.
(A) Okay. I can take you there / Okay. There's no problem. I can take you there right now. (here I intend to say that there is no trouble to take him to his destination).

(B) Do you know how long it will take? / How far is it to the art gallery?
(A) It takes about 20 minutes/ Probably 20 minutes/ Probaby it will take 20 minutes, sir / lady.

(A) Is it your first trip to Ireland? Is it your first time in Ireland?
(B) Yes and I'm enjoying it very much. (is it wrong to say: "Yes, I'm liking it very much" ? And is it wrong to ask: "Are you liking the place, sir?")

(A) Here we are, sir. And that'll be $ 23.15
(B) All right. Here it is. Keep the change.

(A) Thank you. sir. And Here is my card.
(B) Thanks!

Dialogue nº 2:

(A) = cabdriver (B) = passenger

(A) Good morning, lady.
(B) Good morning, sir. Could you please, take me to the Phoenix Park?
(A) Yes. Please, get in, relax and make yourself comfortable (here my intention is to tell the passenger to get in and relax).
(B) Is there a church near here?
(A) Yes. It is about 15 minutes from here. Do you know Saint Patrick's Cathedral?
(B) No. I haven't had the opportunity yet, sir.
(A) So, I'll take you there before going to the Phoenix Park . What do you think about?
(B) Ok, that's a great idea!

After reaching Phoenix Park....

(A) Here we are, lady. That'll be $ 32.00. And here is my card. My phone number is 661 5343. In the event of you need a taxi just phone/call me.Okay?
(B) I'll need to go to The Playhouse nightclub tonight!
(A) What time (or: At what time?) will you need a taxi? / What time can I pick you up? (here my intention is to ask at what time the passenger will need the taxi)
(B) Pick me up in front of the Inn at 8:00 p.m / 8 o' clock.
(A) So, at 8 o'clock. Ok. I'll be in front of the Inn on the scheduled time. (Here my intention is to confirm the schedule and tell the passenger that I'll be there = at the Inn in this case, on the scheduled time).
(B) Thanks. See you later, sir.
(A) See you later then!

My final question is: If a passenger answers the cabdriver: "Ok, cheers!" in reply to: "Please get in and relax". What does it mean?

Thank you very much,
Anon.
  

Top answer

Hi, In my experience, cab drivers don't usually hand out cards. However, let's assume that they do. My other comment is that ESL learners tend to make such dialogues too long.

  • Hi, In my experience, cab drivers don't usually hand out cards.
  • However, let's assume that they do.
  • My other comment is that ESL learners tend to make such dialogues too long.
  • Cab drivers are not usually very chatty with their customers.
  • at leasy not in my experience.
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Hi,
In my experience, cab drivers don't usually hand out cards. However, let's assume that they do.

My other comment is that ESL learners tend to make such dialogues too long. Cab drivers are not usually very chatty with their customers. at leasy not in my experience. Perhaps they are, where you live?

In the following dialogues could you please, check the green sentences
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Hi Clive

Thanks for cheking the dialogues. Of course we can't generalize, but if cabdrivers are not usually very chatty with the customers in your country, so you must get in a taxi in mine and you will see how chatty they are. I'm from "Itabuna". It's a city of Bahia state, in Brazil.
Things you said that they don't usually do there, here for sure they do. For instance: some of
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Hi,

Thanks for cheking the dialogues. Of course we can't generalize, but if cabdrivers are not usually very chatty with the customers in your country, so you must get in a taxi in mine and you will see how chatty they are. I'm from "Itabuna". It's a city of Bahia state, in Brazil.
Things you said that they don't usually do there, here for sure they do. For instance: some of the
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Hello again,Clive!

Thanks for checking my doubts. Concerning my doubt nº 1, let me see if I really understood what you have just said:

You meant that every time a passenger just says e.g.:" To the National Art Gallery,please" , the taxi driver should say:"where to ? " because the passenger
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Hello again,Clive!

Thanks for checking my doubts. Concerning my doubt nº 1, let me see if I really understood what you have just said:

You meant that every time a passenger just says e.g.:" To the National Art Gallery,please" , the taxi driver should say:"where to ? " because the passenger
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Hi,

Concerning my doubt nº 1, let me see if I really understood what you have just said:


You meant that every time a passenger just says e.g.:" To the National Art Gallery,please" , the taxi driver should say:"where to ? " because the passenger is also being not so specific in his information (as when he said e.g. “To the center, please.”). "The passenger shou
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Thank you for your patience,Clive. Now I understood what you were trying to say. But I will insist in one situation, please! Let’s suppose a foreigner decides to visit New York city for the first time. So he doesn’t know almost anything about the city, but heard something about “Manhattan” and would like to visit it. For some reason when he gets in the taxi he forgets to inform immedia
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Hi,
Now I understood what you were trying to say. But I will insist in one situation, please! Let’s suppose a foreigner decides to visit New York city for the first time. So he doesn’t know almost anything about the city, but heard something about “Manhattan” and would like to visit it. For some reason when he gets in the taxi he forgets to inform immediately to the taxi driver
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Hi, Clive

Thank you very much for all your attention up till now. And I should say that here, in my country,since passenger and cab driver agree on a price, the cabdriver takes the passenger to his destination, and only returns at a specific time or he takes and wait till the passenger returns from his

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