Could you, please, check if I make sense

Hi everybody!

I have an assignment to write the article about hairdryers. Could you, please, check if I make sense in the following sentences? I appreciate your help.

1) Dry nozzle is one of the more popular hairdryer attachments among hairdressers. It has a flat tapered end and is essential for hairstyling.
2) Diffuser is a bell-shaped attachment with its narrow end clicking onto the nozzle of the hairdryer. Hairdryer diffuser passes a strong airflow through many sieve-like openings and breaks it into warm breeze.
3) Hairdryer manufacturers position diffusers as the attachment to create curls and body. While diffusers do create curls and body, even some skilled hairdressers can't make it.

Thanks in advance