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Doruk Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you please check?

Hi,I'll appreciate if you could check the grammerand consistancy of the following formal letter.

Thanks.

As ...............................Association, we have completed successfully ..................... conference 2011, 12th International .................Conference held on .......... 2011.

In the conference of 2010, we made paper call again after a four years pause and papers were presented by the authors through one of the parallel sessions. Our effort for publishing the papers as a book to create a permanent output of the conference has been completed by March 2011, after a long and bureaucratic procedure.

We believe you will understand this delay and meanwhile we are expecting your valuable support for increasing the number of similar publications.
  

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Hello, doruk - and welcome to English Forums. Your omitted words make it difficult to understand what grammar you intend. In future, please insert fictional names.

  • Hello, doruk - and welcome to English Forums.
  • Your omitted words make it difficult to understand what grammar you intend.
  • In future, please insert fictional names.
  • The ....
  • Association has successfully completed ..
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Hello, doruk - and welcome to English Forums. Your omitted words make it difficult to understand what grammar you intend. In future, please insert fictional names.

The .... Association has successfully completed .. Conference 2011, the 12th International ..Conference, held on .. 2011.

At the 2010 conference, we
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Mister Micawber,

Thank you very much for the review and correction.

Doruk

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