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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

could you look to my introduction and make notes

0Hi every bady02br
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00I have to write an essay about the ways of resistance especialy the boycutt campaign, and I would like to let you read the introducation of my essay in order to let you check the grammar, make notes to improve and make it interesting.02br
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00 In the course of time the resistance against occupation is right to all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the meaning of resistance has been changed from resistance with weapons to many different ways such as the civil-disobedience, stop dealing with occupation and boycott campaign. There are many countries attempted to use all ways that they can use in order to get the freedom. India, South Africa and Algeria were the best evidence that show us the different ways of resistance. Furthermore, in this essay we would like to try to compare the boycott campaign in Palestine with other countries who used and succeed in it. Also, we would try to reach the point of the importance of the boycott campaign. 0-
  

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0Hi Rame2000sat, 02br 02br 00Here is your intro tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful to you. - Nick02br 02br 01b 00At all times02b 00 01b 00resistance02b 00 against occupation is 01b 00considered justified02b 00 01b 00by02b 00 all people who are occupied.

  • 0Hi Rame2000sat, 02br 02br 00Here is your intro tidied up a little.
  • I hope this is helpful to you.
  • - Nick02br 02br 01b 00At all times02b 00 01b 00resistance02b 00 against occupation is 01b 00considered justified02b 00 01b 00by02b 00 all people who are occupied.
  • Nowadays, the 01b 00concept02b 00 of resistance has been changed from 01b 00simply meaning02b 00 resistance with weapons, to 01b 00include02b 00 many different 01b 00actions02b 00, such 01b 00as civil02b 00-disobedience, 01b 00ceasing to cooperate with occupation forces, and boycotting campaigns.
  • 02b 00 0100India02 00, 0100South Africa02 00 and 00 01b 00are02b 00 the best 01b 00examples02b 00 that show 01b 00us different02b 00 ways of resistance.
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0Hi Rame2000sat, 02br
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00Here is your intro tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful to you. - Nick02br
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01b00At all times02b00 01b00resistance02b00 against occupation is 01b00considered justified02b00 01b00by02b00 all people who are occupied. Nowadays, the 0
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0thanks alot Nick147.02br
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00The notes that you added made my introduction more attractive for reader.0-

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