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The two graphs provided illustrate the survey results conducted among 100 thousand of the UK residents in terms of the reasons why they visited overseas and which nation they travelled from 1994 to 1998.

As a whole, the majority of people in UK travelled abroad for relaxation and Western Europe was the most popular country of their trip.

As is observed from the tables, there was a similarity between the proportion of UK visitors going on vacation for recreation and those visiting friends or relatives. At the same time, the travellers of these two categories declined slightly in 1995 which then trending steadily during three consecutive years, at precisely 20,700 and over 3,100 in 1998, respectively. Ranked as the second place after holiday goers, the business travellers had a growing tendency during five years and finished the period at approximately 4,000 in 1998. The number of Britain people going for unspecific reasons is much lower than the ones going for entertainment. There was a fluctuation in this kind of tourism, which hovered around the figure 1,000 during this period.

With regard to the second chart, while North America is the least common destination, Western Europe is the best option of UK citizens. Despite the downward trend in 1995, the visitors in Europe then witnessed a dramatic jump to above 24,500 in 1998, compared with the others, it was far more significant than the remained locations. It is noticeable that the figure of visitors to North America boosted twofold from 914 in 1995 to nearly 1,890 in 1998. The total number of travellers marginally dropped to approximately 21,500 in 1995, however, it recovered and reached a peak of closely 29,000 in the year 1998.