Could you improve this essay written for me by a friend of mine?

Could you improve this essay written for me by a friend of mine?

Could you improve this essay written for me by a friend of mine?

Life has many adventures, the theme of which you have to discover. Like a roller coaster, it goes up and down, faster and faster, and then it slows down upon reaching great heights.

‘I need to win this contest. I need to be the champion.’ This is what I often hear from a participant in a competition. Who doesn’t want to bring home the bacon after all?

If you want to get through life’s struggles, will you just sit in a corner, keep your mouth shut, and let bad things happen? Or will you learn from experience so that you can live far better in the future than before?

Remember: The opponent wants to beat you. If you don’t move from your position, you'll fall dead – a frustrated loser.

I, the leading actress of my own story, won't let tears spring to my eyes. I must overcome this roller coaster challenge called life.