Could you help with grammar of 5 sentences please?

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Could you please help me with these 5 sentences please?

1 The paper place mats which are wrinkled/creased need to be thrown away.

2 I wear my jacket everyday at work yet I boil in it. It's too hot to wear one this time a year.

3 I don't like the way we work at this hotel.

4 Do you remember when I would tell you what my job was like? Did you imagine it would be anything like what you do now.?

5 There are some advantage of/benefits of/to having worked this long for the company.

Thank you so much

Chalkbrd · Accepted Answer

Here are my suggestions:

1 The paper place mats which are wrinkled/creased need to be thrown away. [Throw away the paper placemats that are wrinkled or creased. Wrinkled means they have lots of lines on them, but the lines are not pressed down into them. Creased means they might only have one or two lines, but they have been pressed down into the paper. If you take a paper and fold it in half and then run your hand along it to press it down, you crease the paper.]

2 I wear my jacket everyday at work yet I boil in it. It's too hot to wear one this time a year. [I wear my jacket every day at work, but I boil in it. It's way too hot to wear one this time of year. The word " way" will add more emphasis to it. You don't need it, though.]

3 I don't like the way we work at this hotel. [This is fine.]

4 Do you remember when I would tell you what my job was like? Did you imagine it would be anything like what you do now.? [Do you remember when I told you what my job was like? Did you imagine it would be anything like what you're doing now?]

5 There are some advantage of/benefits of/to having worked this long for the company. [There are some advantages to having worked this long for the company.]

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