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Messier42 Posted 12 years ago
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In medieval age, women have considerably conservative sexual ethics. The court can fine a convict 15 Silngs, 30 Silngs and 45 Silings respectively, if he grabs hands, arms or breast without consent. Back then, 1 Siling amounted to one male cow and 2 Silings were a female cow. Soldiers dispatched to Crusade locked their wives with a chastity belt. However, this conservative sexual ethic started disappearing in late 14th century. It matches the renaissance. Since an licensed prostitution was implemented, many brothels had started spring up. Most of prostitutes were low income brackets, who had to sell their body to escape from poverty. Some were fooled by a deceive pimps. They were socially despised. If they contracted a disease or get in pimps’ bad side, they were kicked out to a street. They had to wear some uniforms like a hood, a shawl and a coat with colors which are red, yellow and green, depending on a rule of cities where they work in so that citizens can avoid them in a street. When they go to church, they always had to sit in a corner. However, ironically, they paid a lot more donation than common people at a church. Because they thought that they have a lot of sins and the only way to go to heave is to pay a lot of donation. However, a church didn’t treat them. People in middle age thought that they can have a grip on the rising rate of rape by implementing the licensed prostitution. 4% of the total women population was rapped. In addition, there was practical reason behind this system. The city wanted to get high finance income. Even the Vatican city made many brothels to fund the war against Osman emperor. In the end, cities tend to earn prosperity with prostitution. There were subsequent numbers of prostitute in strasbourg in France in 15th century. The proportion of prostitute was 6% out of the total number of woman. Cleric were banned on entering a brothel. However, the brothels couldn’t make high income without them. The 20 % of total income derived from their pocket. There were custom that assistance of a master can get married to the master’s wife, after he dies. They could take all the wealth of the master. But the wives usually were much older than them. They became a loyal customer of a brothel. In contrary to them, Jewish were not allowed to go to brothels. Prostitution disappeared in the wake of syphilis. Europeans could bring various crops after Columbus found America continent as well as the syphilis. The sexually transmitted disease spread like a wild fire throughout the European continent from the last 15th century through the early 16th century. With this pandemic disease, the number of the brothel started plummeting.
  

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