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The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip. In season 2, we move up the ladder, you realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a pawn and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders. As the Each season goes goes by, they move up a criminal until the last season when they find the mastermind behind the kidnapping.
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The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip. In season 2, we move up the ladder, you realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a pawn and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders. As the Each season goes goes by, they move up a criminal until the last season when they find the mastermind behind the kidnapping.
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I have underlined some problems: The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip. In season 2 , we move up the ladder, yo u realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a **** and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders. As the Each season goes goes by, they move up a criminal until the last seas on w hen they find the mastermind behind the kidnapping.
- I have underlined some problems: The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip.
- In season 2 , we move up the ladder, yo u realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a **** and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders.
- As the Each season goes goes by, they move up a criminal until the last seas on w hen they find the mastermind behind the kidnapping.
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I have underlined some problems:
The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip. In season 2, we move up the ladder, you realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a **** and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders. As the Each season goes goes by
The first season of the show explores how a corrupt FBI agent has kidnapped a person and is using her as a bargaining chip. In season 2, we move up the ladder, you realise that the corrupt FBI agent is a **** and the FBI is looking to find the person who was giving the orders. As the Each season goes goes by
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