Could you help me with this a little proofreading?

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I think I understand now. What I didn't understand wasn't related to the difference between our language, but the logic between that Spainish site is up-to-date and English is not. And if the owners of the site of Spainish poetry was able to make their site up-to-date and the visitor for their sites doesn't need to configure anything in his firewall, then their site could break through to the firewall. On the other hand, if you mean that the English Site for the English Poetry doesn't have the feature that enables it in order for the visitor doesn't need to make anything in his firewall, then this will be quite bad beacuse I think English is more important than Spainish .

It would be geratly appriciated if you couod help me.

Dimsumexpress · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I will point out the obvious issues:

Language

but the logic between that Spainish site is up-to-date and English is not. - this doesn't make any sense

Do you mean "update the website?". Logic -seems to be the wrong choice of word. "fact" perhaps!

I have no idea what the rest of the text was trying to convey. I know thoughl it is about the incompatibility of the two poetry sites having problems with firewall config. Also, in the second sentence " but the logic between that Spainish site is up-to-date and English is not. And if the owners of the site of Spainish poetry was able to make their site up-to-date and the visitor for their sites doesn't need to configure anything in his firewall, So which site was up-to-date? I am confused!

Anonymous · Answer

This is how I would revise it, based on my limited knowledge of firewalls:

I think I understand now. What I didn't understand wasn't related to the difference between our languages, but rather the difference between the software implementation on the Spanish site and that on the English one. As I understand it now, the Spanish poetry site has more up-to-date software, so that visitors with a firewall don't have to make any adjustments to get onto the site. The English poetry site on the other hand apparently does not have the latest software, and so visitors with a firewall have to make adjustments in order to get on. This is cause for concern because there will naturally be more visitors to an English poetry site.

Mohammad Lardhi · Answer

Thank you so much indeed, I have facing many difficultities in English, in spite of my great interest in English.

Incidentally, I was emailing a friend on a forum and was discussing with him aobut a problem on one web-site of English Poetry http://forum.thefreedictionary.com/postsm269997_A-problem-with-run-an-audio-file-at-a-website.aspx#269997

However, I don't a problem with this Spainish poetry http://www.palabravirtual.com/index.php?ir=ver_voz1.php&p=jaime%20sabines&t=los%20amorosos&wid=129

As a result, I asked my friend why the sounds on the site of Spainish Poetry play well for me, however, the on English poetry don't play at all with me. His response was as follows:

'This site (Spainish poetry) works because they have kept their software up to date. It is the other site that is the origin of the problem. It Norton Security that prevents you from changing the settings in your firewall that would adapt it to the older software.'

Thus, I want to reply for him with that message to which I want a proofreading.

I hope you undersatand me.

Could you help me with this a little proofreading?

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