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Adonis1013 Posted 16 years ago
Vocabulary

Could you help me with the two sentences? Thank you.

Hello,

Could you help me check out these two sentence? If you find anything worng with vocabualry and grammar, please correct them. Thank you very much.



1. The sun is strong during summers and the temperature of the winter is not very low. This attracts many tourists to travel to at any time of the year.





people speak Cantonese as their first language. Most residents there, however, can speak English in their daily conversation.
  

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I have underlined problems and struck out useless verbiage: 1. The sun is strong during summers and the temperature of the winter is not very low. This attracts many tourists to travel to Hong Kong at any time of the year.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined problems and struck out useless verbiage: 1.
  • The sun is strong during summers and the temperature of the winter is not very low.
  • This attracts many tourists to travel to Hong Kong at any time of the year.
  • 2.
  • Hong Kong people speak Cantonese as their first language.
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I have underlined problems and struck out useless verbiage:

1. The sun is strong during summers and the temperature of the winter is not very low. This attracts many tourists to travel to Hong Kong at any time of the year.

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