Could you help me with my writing task 1. Many thanks.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

The two maps illustrate the same islands while the map above is before, the below one is after building tourist construction.

It is clear that the island before being developed is a huge island which has the beach located in the west. The total length of this island is about 250 meters.

Over the years, this island has been built more buildings such as restaurants and accommodation. There are two areas of accommodation while one area is in the center of the island, the other which has the footpath connected to the beach is on the west. Between the accommodation there are restaurants in the north and a reception below, which is surrounded by a vehicle path. In the South , the vehicle path leads to a pier where tourists can join sailing activity. Besides customers can swim on the beach located in the west.

Overall, comparing two maps, one change that stands out is the significant rise of buildings. In addition, there are roads and activities to develop the tourism, which is a suitable place for travelers.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The two maps illustrate the same islands ( This means that on each map there are several islands. ) while the map above is before, the below one is after building tourist construction.

~~It is clear that~~ the island before being developed is a huge (Huge means very very large. A huge island will have many cities, roads and towns. It will have an airport, a university and factories. Is this island a huge island? ) island which has the beach located in the west. The total length of this island is about 250 meters.

Over the years, this island has been built (incorrect. People do not build islands. Islands are created by nature, not people. e.g. This house has been built to accommodate a family of five people.) more buildings such as restaurants and accommodation. There are two areas of accommodation while one area is in the center of the island, the other which has the footpath connected to the beach is on the west. Between the accommodation (Between needs two things. Between the school and the road there is a football pitch.) there are restaurants (How many? Two or five?) in the north and a reception below, which is surrounded by a vehicle path. In the South , the vehicle path leads to a pier where tourists can sail. ~~join sailing activity~~. Besides they ~~customers~~ can swim on the beach (We swim in the ocean or in a swimming pool. We walk or sunbathe on the beach. ) located in the west.

(You do not need a conclusion paragraph in Task 1.)

Overall, comparing two maps, one change that stands out is the significant rise of buildings. (This means that the buildings are very high. Are these buildings high?) In addition, there are roads and activities to develop the tourism, which is a suitable place for travelers.

Example Essay:

Structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2: Describe the first map
Paragraph 3: Describe the second map with comparisons to the first.

The first map shows an uninhabited small low-lying island about 230 meters long (east-west) by 50 to 80 meters wide (north-south). The second map shows the island after its development.

The undeveloped island has a small beach on the western end, and a site suitable for a pier on the south side. There are a few palm trees growing, but otherwise, the island is empty.

After development, many visitor facilities can be seen. There is a pier for small boats to dock and discharge passengers and supplies. The reception building is about twenty meters from the pier, and behind it, perhaps ten meters, a restaurant. To the east and west of the reception, there are accommodations, in the form of huts. The east section has nine huts, and the west has five. There are footpaths leading between all the huts, the beach, the restaurant and reception, and a circular vehicular track around the reception building leading to the pier. The swimming beach is closer to the west section. The eastern end of the island has not been developed.

Could you help me with my writing task 1. Many thanks.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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