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I had been planning this trip for a half of the year. It was July and the sun was shining! I left from my country and first off I arrived in Austria. It was a nice country and I ate a lot of wiener schnitzel in the local restaurant. A few days later I travelled to Slovakia and I arrived in Bratislava at 7.30 pm. Slovakian people were so welcoming me that I had ever seen. Then I travelled to Germany and spent time on watching the local football match. I have to say I love German culture. A few days later I had to move on my trip to Poland. I arrived in Warsaw at 2.30 pm and I visited the museums. On that note, it was a great experience!

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I had been planning this trip for a half of the year.
I had been planning this trip for half of the year.

I left from my country and first off I arrived in Austria.
I left my country and arrived first in Austria.

Slovakian people were so welcoming me that I had ever seen.
The Slovakian people were very welcoming. OR
The Slovkian people were the most welcoming I had ever seen.

Then I travelled to Germany and spent time on watching the local football match.
Then I travelled to Germany and spent time watching a local football match.

A few days later I had to move on my trip to Poland.
A few days later I had to move on to Poland. OR
A few days later I moved on to Poland.

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