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Giang hoang Posted 6 years ago
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Could you help me with my ielts writing task 2. Thank you very much.

Serving problems with student's behavior is no longer uncommon to many countries' schools. There are many reasons why a student's behavior is decreasing badly in this modern-day world.

The first main reason is the environment, which the students are living in, is not a healthy society. These children could be spoiled. Therefore, their actions are definitely different from other students raised in a lively environment. For example, they will not listen to their teachers and often bully their classmates, consequently leading them to the dark side of society. The second reason is their parents' appearance. Some working parents do not have time to play with their offspring. They are free to do whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they pleased. This means when they get to school age, they have no idea about being a disciplined student and respecting their teacher and refusing to obey the school's rules.

In my opinion, the solution to this particular problem is to put them into a more suitable environment such as places that say no to drugs and violence. Or they can go to the therapist to treat their problem and their parents need to spend more time with them.

In conclusion, students' bad behavior may come from many reasons but mostly from where they live and their parents. However, this is no longer a problem for individual families, but society as a whole. therefore the government should support families more in terms of raising the next generation

  

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