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Lady Sylenda Posted 8 years ago
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Could you help me with my complicated sentence?

Hi!

I'm trying to write a short fiction in English and I'm nervous since English is not my mother tongue. I just wrote a sentence but I'm not sure if it's correct. Could you help me?

"But Layla, stubborn and passionate commander that she is, drew her eyebrows together into a frown and said..."

  

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But Layla, the stubborn and passionate commander that she is, drew her eyebrows together into a frown and said... But Layla, stubborn and passionate as she is, drew her eyebrows together into a frown and said...

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But Layla, the stubborn and passionate commander that she is, drew her eyebrows together into a frown and said...

But Layla, stubborn and passionate as she is, drew her eyebrows together into a frown and said...

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