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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Could you help me with my "About Me", please?

Hey guys! I'm trying to write a little about myself. As you can see the text is very short (and it should be)... But does it sound natural? Can you find any grammatical mistakes? Thanks in advance!

Art has always been present in my life. Because I come from an artistic family, I had many opportunities to explore it and create my own works. Furthermore, working experience at our family gallery connected with my own experiments, allowed me to broaden my horizons, to create my own style, and to refine my artistic taste.
  

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Furthermore, work experience at our family gallery, combined with my own experiments,...

  • Furthermore, work experience at our family gallery, combined with my own experiments,...
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